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haiku? [Mar. 25th, 2007|11:06 pm]
Myke on a Byke
nothing good on tv
I keep moving
no stories tonight
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[User Picture]From: aktdeco
2007-03-26 05:46 am (UTC)
You should have watched the first part of the Blue Planet miniseries on Discover Channel tonight. SO awesome.
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[User Picture]From: heartofdarknes
2007-03-26 10:57 pm (UTC)
you should have paid attention in lit class so you would know that the proper form for a haiku is 5-7-5 (syllables that is)
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[User Picture]From: kidsinthefront
2007-03-27 09:07 pm (UTC)
or some variation thereof, derek.
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[User Picture]From: heartofdarknes
2007-03-28 04:07 pm (UTC)
even so, your 'haiku' if thats what were referring to said aforementioned literary entry as, holds the syllable structure of 6-4-5, following no degree or semblance of order whatsoever. sorry i always have to call you out on your grammar buddy. arent you almost a college graduate? wtf?

miss you buddy!
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[User Picture]From: kidsinthefront
2007-03-28 09:23 pm (UTC)
this has nothing to do with grammar, and various haikus over the past 100 years have taken on a somewhat more free flowing, less stringent syllable arrangement. therefore, not all haikus necessarily have to contain a syllable arrangement of 5-7-5. I think you're the one who needs to learn a little bit more about what you're trying to criticize before doing so, as its obvious you don't spend much time reading haikus other than what your 7th great English teacher told you to write.

booyah!
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[User Picture]From: curyinahurry
2007-03-30 06:29 am (UTC)
sassy!
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